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Rizu



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PostSubject: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:56 pm

The cry of an infant consumed the broken city in sorrows. A soft glimmer of human figures danced around the fallen buildings. The thick fumes of depression filled the nostrils of the dead, silent sobs were swimming within the rotten structures. Spirits struggled to escape, unaware that they no longer existed. The soft whispers of the wind drowned out the empty shouts, cutting through the poisoned air. The cracked, dissolved bones slept upon the sinking earth, falling into the black abyss below. The spoiled dreams were buried deep within the graveyards of the smashed skulls. Nightmares still arouse fresh from the seething earth, only having the forever stare to be afraid. Black hands reached out to cover the dimming wreck, letting the lost souls take their sleep. The echo's of warnings still played, even though there was no one to take them to mind.

- Carolie :afro:
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:32 pm

Mah son Carolie, keepin' it morbid and depressing. ;D

xD No but seriously, nice job here !
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:49 pm

Thank you! :lol!:
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:52 pm

Yes, it was a little depressing.. o.o
But I think you are a master of words. Great job! 8)
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:53 pm

Thanks xD
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:55 pm

Mhhmm. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:02 pm

That really good Carolie!!! Keep it up. It was depressing though.. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:32 pm

Shesh Liz you couldn't be any worse when it comes to writing. ):
Just kidding, I loved it. Keep up all the good work. <3
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PostSubject: Re: Spirits Poem/Short Story   Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:58 pm

Mwhaahahahaha
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